06-05-2014, 05:20 AM
Hey ! ) I personally like your poem. But the shortness of the lines sacrifies a bit of your poem's lyrism. Play with sounds, write longer lines and see what comes out of it ! Keep up the good work.
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Until Death Rings -- I Bring My Love - by Reesedog914 - 06-05-2014, 02:40 AM
RE: Until Death Rings -- I Bring My Love - by tectak - 06-05-2014, 03:29 AM
RE: Until Death Rings -- I Bring My Love - by Lyricgangsta - 06-05-2014, 05:20 AM
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