#2

[ChristopherSea]

I see where you want to go with the poem, but your bell rings hollow. I think you want something like: the sound of church bells murmur through the mist. What you have now makes no sense. What weights or weighs, do you mean the bell itself? That would have to be one light bell if it weighs no more than a pile of leaves. Is that atheist buried in a shallow grave under those leaves? The most important query is: why would you think a church bell carries any weight as a symbol of Christianity to an atheist, who thinks the concept of a god is silly and that religion is an absurdity? Do you think a mere bell would sway their beliefs? This needs a lot more work in establishing your point of view, developing your metaphor and assembling the proper images. Good luck with your next edit./Chris