06-04-2014, 11:48 AM
Jack,
jack be nimble
and jumps a fence
this poem makes
not much sense!
If I could, I'd
take your defense,
but I must defer...
the fox. So soft!
"Hunting haiku" well I pretty sure you didn't find it, or if you did parts are missing, like five silly bulls (maybe they gored the fox) or maybe morae eel (ooh, just writing that made me feel eel). I suppose "above" could be the kiru. The leaves could be the kigo.
Haiku third degree:
How does a fox get gored? What is a white sun? The moon, a searchlight? How does one pattern something with leaves? Can I get a kit at Michaels? Do I get to use an Exacto blade?
Sorry, I can't make fox heads or fox tails of this to hang from my rear-view...no that would be a full moon, not a white sun. Please enlighten lowly reader.
Dale
jack be nimble
and jumps a fence
this poem makes
not much sense!
If I could, I'd
take your defense,
but I must defer...
the fox. So soft!
"Hunting haiku" well I pretty sure you didn't find it, or if you did parts are missing, like five silly bulls (maybe they gored the fox) or maybe morae eel (ooh, just writing that made me feel eel). I suppose "above" could be the kiru. The leaves could be the kigo.
Haiku third degree:
How does a fox get gored? What is a white sun? The moon, a searchlight? How does one pattern something with leaves? Can I get a kit at Michaels? Do I get to use an Exacto blade?
Sorry, I can't make fox heads or fox tails of this to hang from my rear-view...no that would be a full moon, not a white sun. Please enlighten lowly reader.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.