Half Empty
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(06-04-2014, 08:49 AM)Qdeathstar Wrote:  
(06-03-2014, 01:59 PM)trueenigma Wrote:  Honestly, crucified beyond longing and despair rings a bit empty in the abstractions, and scattered shattered soul is begging for a real metaphor.
Yeah, but its not beyond, its between. I can feel the feeling of being ripped apart. I love that line myself.


Also, thanks for explaining the ampersand.
actually, since there is no actual place located either beyond or between longing and despair, it makes no difference.

Saying I'm crucified between two abstract locations makes no sense. "I'm crucified" makes no sense. If you were already crucified you might be dead. If you are going to be crucified between longing and despair then you are longing to be crucified and expecting to live on in despair afterwards. If you are being crucified between longing and despair then that is some strange geography.
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Half Empty - by Erthona - 06-03-2014, 09:59 AM
RE: Half Empty - by LorettaYoung - 06-03-2014, 10:15 AM
RE: Half Empty - by QDeathstar - 06-03-2014, 10:40 AM
RE: Half Empty - by Jimmy Stark - 06-03-2014, 10:48 AM
RE: Half Empty - by Isis - 06-03-2014, 11:12 AM
RE: Half Empty - by just mercedes - 06-03-2014, 12:06 PM
RE: Half Empty - by trueenigma - 06-03-2014, 01:59 PM
RE: Half Empty - by QDeathstar - 06-04-2014, 08:49 AM
RE: Half Empty - by trueenigma - 06-04-2014, 10:33 AM
RE: Half Empty - by Erthona - 06-03-2014, 02:30 PM
RE: Half Empty - by Isis - 06-04-2014, 12:31 PM
RE: Half Empty - by tectak - 06-04-2014, 10:09 PM
RE: Half Empty - by Erthona - 06-04-2014, 09:05 AM
RE: Half Empty - by QDeathstar - 06-04-2014, 10:51 AM
RE: Half Empty - by trueenigma - 06-04-2014, 11:06 AM
RE: Half Empty - by Erthona - 06-04-2014, 12:23 PM
RE: Half Empty - by John Galt - 06-04-2014, 05:44 PM
RE: Half Empty - by tectak - 06-04-2014, 07:55 PM
RE: Half Empty - by ellajam - 06-04-2014, 09:28 PM
RE: Half Empty - by Erthona - 06-04-2014, 10:45 PM
RE: Half Empty - by ellajam - 06-04-2014, 11:05 PM
RE: Half Empty - by Erthona - 06-05-2014, 03:31 AM
RE: Half Empty - by ellajam - 06-05-2014, 04:36 AM
RE: Half Empty - by abu nuwas - 06-05-2014, 07:06 AM
RE: Half Empty - by Erthona - 06-05-2014, 07:47 AM



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