06-04-2014, 03:48 AM
Don't worry about being mean or rude, you say it in a constructive way, i can handle critique, and i'm not losing courage over a bad poem or two, or three for that matter. I don't think i can edit this at the moment, when i write i'm in different states of mind for each text (of course there is a certain mood i usually write with, but sometimes i stray far from the usual style) and this one is not my typically way to write. I just can't write stuff on command, so i just go back to things and edit when i feel like it, sometimes i never do for. But being brutally honest is good, then any praise will have so much more weight behind it, and it's not mean to be honest, in some cases it is, but mostly not. And i will keep writing, it's a hobby i have had for many years, so i wont stop now, and i have improved a lot. I also have gotten good feedback for some of my danish poems and other writings from people of varying experience in reading and reading, but it's harder in english