Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00002, blake,brownlie)

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Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00002, blake,brownlie)

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06-04-2014, 12:39 AM

This was a good poem, but on this line:

I just get bored, so up the anti.

You probably meant to go with the word "ante"

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Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00002, blake,brownlie) - by tectak - 06-03-2014, 11:13 PM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today - by ChristopherSea - 06-03-2014, 11:37 PM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today - by Jimmy Stark - 06-04-2014, 12:32 AM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today - by Blake - 06-04-2014, 12:39 AM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today - by tectak - 06-04-2014, 12:54 AM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00001, blake) - by ChristopherSea - 06-04-2014, 02:56 AM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00001, blake) - by LorettaYoung - 06-04-2014, 06:46 AM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00001, blake) - by tectak - 06-04-2014, 02:42 PM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00001, blake) - by LorettaYoung - 06-04-2014, 09:32 PM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00001, blake) - by tectak - 06-04-2014, 09:54 PM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00001, blake) - by LorettaYoung - 06-04-2014, 10:57 PM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00001, blake) - by tectak - 06-04-2014, 11:08 PM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00001, blake) - by LorettaYoung - 06-04-2014, 11:48 PM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00001, blake) - by LorettaYoung - 06-05-2014, 04:51 AM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00001, blake) - by kindofahippy - 06-04-2014, 11:42 PM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00001, blake) - by tectak - 06-04-2014, 11:50 PM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00001, blake) - by LorettaYoung - 06-04-2014, 11:52 PM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00001, blake) - by Brownlie - 06-05-2014, 03:08 PM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00002, blake,brownlie) - by tectak - 06-05-2014, 06:41 PM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00001, blake) - by just mercedes - 06-05-2014, 03:49 PM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00002, blake,brownlie) - by tectak - 06-06-2014, 01:25 AM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00002, blake,brownlie) - by Brownlie - 06-06-2014, 05:57 AM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00002, blake,brownlie) - by LorettaYoung - 06-06-2014, 06:33 AM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00002, blake,brownlie) - by tectak - 06-06-2014, 07:02 AM

RE: Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00002, blake,brownlie) - by LorettaYoung - 06-06-2014, 09:43 AM

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