06-03-2014, 08:06 PM
Thanks to all three for your input. I see some of the problems that has been brought up, though i think some part are ok, i can see that some are boring and not very creative. To people who think this is all metaphor it is really a mix, i work as a volunteer in a garden, and i'm going to take an agricultural education, so this is about becoming more self sufficient and finding something for the first time in my life, that i like to do.
Many parts have a double meaning, as f.ex "I know the way, to sow the seed for a better day" it is a metaphor but it's drawn from the fact that i want to grow my own garden and make a living as a farmer/gardener
I don't have a lot of english texts as i live at a school where i have just taken a course, and the teacher wanted me to write in danish. I have some old text (song texts, that could be turned into poems) but they are on a computer i don't have with me. I have a few english texts that i have somewhere here which i will post when i find them. I just started writing in english again when i found this site, and i will post my poems in order, from those i like the least, to those i like the best, with some possible exceptions though.
Many parts have a double meaning, as f.ex "I know the way, to sow the seed for a better day" it is a metaphor but it's drawn from the fact that i want to grow my own garden and make a living as a farmer/gardener
I don't have a lot of english texts as i live at a school where i have just taken a course, and the teacher wanted me to write in danish. I have some old text (song texts, that could be turned into poems) but they are on a computer i don't have with me. I have a few english texts that i have somewhere here which i will post when i find them. I just started writing in english again when i found this site, and i will post my poems in order, from those i like the least, to those i like the best, with some possible exceptions though.