06-03-2014, 10:40 AM
I agree with Loretta about "treasure house"
But i was also wondering about a few other things.
"If scarcity sets the value of things" and "yet, of you i have only these things"
I wonder if you could use a more descriptive word.
Jewels and trinkets perhaps.
If that ruins the meter, I apologize ahead of time.
Why the ampersand?
But i was also wondering about a few other things.
"If scarcity sets the value of things" and "yet, of you i have only these things"
I wonder if you could use a more descriptive word.
Jewels and trinkets perhaps.
If that ruins the meter, I apologize ahead of time.
Why the ampersand?