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Said the Priest to the Elder

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06-03-2014, 03:52 AM

There is not enough imagery or allusion for me to understand what event you are referring too.

Perhaps you could drop a name of a country in the second stanza there...

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Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 06-03-2014, 02:42 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by QDeathstar - 06-03-2014, 03:52 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 06-03-2014, 05:56 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by QDeathstar - 06-03-2014, 06:49 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by Tiger the Lion - 06-03-2014, 07:23 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 06-03-2014, 02:47 PM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by LorettaYoung - 06-04-2014, 11:03 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 06-11-2014, 09:08 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by Tiger the Lion - 06-11-2014, 09:32 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by nb - 06-12-2014, 08:38 PM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 06-17-2014, 04:11 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by i pray to pills - 06-23-2014, 08:54 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by i pray to pills - 06-14-2014, 09:19 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by Erthona - 06-15-2014, 04:53 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by i pray to pills - 06-15-2014, 05:34 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by stajas - 06-25-2014, 01:08 PM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 06-26-2014, 08:49 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by stajas - 06-27-2014, 12:33 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 07-05-2014, 04:53 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by tomasmk - 06-30-2014, 03:52 AM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by catfacemeowmers - 07-15-2014, 05:22 PM

RE: Said the Priest to the Elder - by metalfan91 - 08-11-2014, 04:09 AM

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