O Nightly Thoughts
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The frustrated muse. An equal parallel to the plight of a seasonal stale mate with thoughts to paper. The faded shirt, the ghostly stain, a humidly costal foreboding write. I have read this over more than three times and have been bothered to read it again. Mostly because of my relation to the poem. I think I will go to France, almost.

I enjoyed the read, and can surmise no critical help to your piece other than I understand.
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O Nightly Thoughts - by heslopian - 05-17-2014, 09:46 AM
RE: O Nightly Thoughts - by Erthona - 05-17-2014, 10:12 AM
RE: O Nightly Thoughts - by heslopian - 05-17-2014, 10:39 AM
RE: O Nightly Thoughts - by Erthona - 05-18-2014, 12:01 AM
RE: O Nightly Thoughts - by heslopian - 05-18-2014, 01:54 AM
RE: O Nightly Thoughts - by LorettaYoung - 05-19-2014, 12:31 AM
RE: O Nightly Thoughts - by heslopian - 05-19-2014, 12:56 AM
RE: O Nightly Thoughts - by Markworth - 05-19-2014, 04:03 AM
RE: O Nightly Thoughts - by heslopian - 05-19-2014, 07:03 AM
RE: O Nightly Thoughts - by Apex Vega - 05-19-2014, 07:23 AM
RE: O Nightly Thoughts - by heslopian - 05-21-2014, 06:29 AM
RE: O Nightly Thoughts - by tmanzano - 06-02-2014, 12:31 PM
RE: O Nightly Thoughts - by heslopian - 06-03-2014, 02:40 AM
RE: O Nightly Thoughts - by Isis - 06-08-2014, 07:15 AM
RE: O Nightly Thoughts - by heslopian - 06-08-2014, 12:13 PM



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