Arrogance? (No Relation)

[QDeathstar]

I’m working nights with brain-dead oafs yes
who live to smoke on break; yes
they’re rough and tumble friendly folks, yes
but I just can’t relate. yes

I don’t hack darts or throw my fists i think you could loose the "my" in both lines
or scrounge for strange between my shifts,
I write and sing and cry inside instead. ellajam likes this line, so i defer to her, but i dont know, it doesn't feel interesting