06-02-2014, 10:04 AM
(06-02-2014, 09:39 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: So many keen observations on this peace (sic). I'm not sure why you used the cliche "disturb the peace" when you have so many options, This line is your chance to upend the peace, throw a brick at the peace, or piss on the peace, whatever you can muster. Maybe you had a logic to just disturbing it, but it's your peace to aggravate. As far as "golden gem" goes, I think gem is a big enough word to stand without ANY adjective holding it up. Great read, thanks.
Paul
Thanks paul for reading and commenting. I don't want to shy away from a term just because it's common; disturb fits the mood and adds humor, perhaps subliminally. I will though think about it and appreciate your bringing it to my attention. A golden gem is very precious; i meant it that way. Loretta