I Cede You Peace
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So many keen observations on this peace (sic). I'm not sure why you used the cliche "disturb the peace" when you have so many options, This line is your chance to upend the peace, throw a brick at the peace, or piss on the peace, whatever you can muster. Maybe you had a logic to just disturbing it, but it's your peace to aggravate. As far as "golden gem" goes, I think gem is a big enough word to stand without ANY adjective holding it up. Great read, thanks.
Paul
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I Cede You Peace - by LorettaYoung - 05-11-2014, 11:39 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by tectak - 05-12-2014, 12:52 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by Erthona - 05-12-2014, 05:25 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by nb - 05-12-2014, 05:53 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by abu nuwas - 05-12-2014, 06:03 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by SuicidalBlueJay - 05-12-2014, 11:20 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by billy - 05-12-2014, 05:42 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by ellajam - 05-12-2014, 09:04 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by tectak - 05-12-2014, 10:52 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by abu nuwas - 05-13-2014, 02:53 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by tectak - 05-13-2014, 03:08 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by tectak - 05-13-2014, 03:19 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by LorettaYoung - 05-14-2014, 07:53 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by tectak - 05-23-2014, 06:56 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by LorettaYoung - 05-23-2014, 09:15 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by tectak - 05-24-2014, 12:18 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by Tiger the Lion - 06-02-2014, 09:39 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by LorettaYoung - 06-02-2014, 10:04 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by metalfan91 - 06-03-2014, 02:14 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by LorettaYoung - 06-03-2014, 06:42 AM



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