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After Seven Years
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06-01-2014, 06:54 PM
I think it's good, but i don't understand what the plastic paradise meaphor means, could you clarify it a bit, just to me, i don't mean in the poem. I also think that it seems a little weak that she only "dislikes this plastic paradise, of comb and mirror, the thickening scars" for such abuse i personally think dislike lacks some intensity.
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After Seven Years - by 71degrees - 05-26-2014, 08:32 AM
RE: After Seven Years - by Todd - 05-26-2014, 09:07 AM
RE: After Seven Years - by 71degrees - 05-27-2014, 08:44 AM
RE: After Seven Years - by QDeathstar - 05-26-2014, 09:18 AM
RE: After Seven Years - by LorettaYoung - 06-01-2014, 11:10 PM
RE: After Seven Years - by MT-EMPTY - 06-01-2014, 06:54 PM
RE: After Seven Years - by 71degrees - 06-02-2014, 02:32 AM
RE: After Seven Years - by Isis - 06-02-2014, 03:39 AM
RE: After Seven Years - by Jimmy Stark - 06-02-2014, 12:15 PM
RE: After Seven Years - by 71degrees - 06-02-2014, 10:19 PM
RE: After Seven Years - by tmanzano - 06-05-2014, 02:52 AM
RE: After Seven Years - by 71degrees - 06-05-2014, 11:42 PM
RE: After Seven Years - by expiring_touch - 06-05-2014, 06:18 AM
RE: After Seven Years - by John Galt - 06-06-2014, 04:43 AM
RE: After Seven Years - by 71degrees - 06-07-2014, 12:40 PM
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