Undoing

[Nujet2002]

Spring scented lights
fill up the sky, spill over
the roof into my glass --
I’ve spilt myself all over
the pavement, too,
red wine and all, shy nods,
and obscene swirls
with a stranger. He tied really like the imagery of this line of spilling yourself and not just the wine, however the spill and spilt are a bit repetitive
red leather bracelets same thing with the red and red
to my wrists
before I disappeared
back to the twilight. unsure of where you are disappearing when already tied up
I’ve never realized
how loud it can be -
the strike of keys
on the piano. this line just lost me so i think I'm just missing something
Your hands
along the
seams,
undoing great ending