06-01-2014, 11:45 PM
I wrote these words to fill a hole within your soul;
so alone now if truth be told.
The second line could be comical. A comical filler line. But it doesn't add much but a rhyme. A song by Pink Floyd does that: The wall was too high/as you can see. As you can see is a bad line. But they get away with it because they're playing instruments.
Today it always seems your caress is so cold.
This line could be comical too. Killers make jokes and say silly things. But they get away with it because they plan on killing you anyway.
Careful now you've just slept,
slightly scary now I haven't wept.
We always said it would last forever,
frightening how slightly things seem to sever.
Why slightly?
See your eyes are pale and grey,
gravely it seems you've slipped away.
Awkward to see you limb by limb,
loosely I remember removing them.
Though you'll fit nicely I'm quite sure,
shivering below my freezer's door,
do not knock is all I implore,
or finger by finger I'll settle the score.
so alone now if truth be told.
The second line could be comical. A comical filler line. But it doesn't add much but a rhyme. A song by Pink Floyd does that: The wall was too high/as you can see. As you can see is a bad line. But they get away with it because they're playing instruments.
Today it always seems your caress is so cold.
This line could be comical too. Killers make jokes and say silly things. But they get away with it because they plan on killing you anyway.
Careful now you've just slept,
slightly scary now I haven't wept.
We always said it would last forever,
frightening how slightly things seem to sever.
Why slightly?
See your eyes are pale and grey,
gravely it seems you've slipped away.
Awkward to see you limb by limb,
loosely I remember removing them.
Though you'll fit nicely I'm quite sure,
shivering below my freezer's door,
do not knock is all I implore,
or finger by finger I'll settle the score.