Ants -- First post!
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I like the double entendre(s), a nice slice of irony with that grape jelly, which can get you killed now days, grape jelly, not irony.

Excellent simile "I felt the wind slap my face like I had just done something wrong"

Best,

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Ants -- First post! - by olive_morphia - 05-29-2014, 11:13 PM
RE: Ants -- First post! - by billy - 05-30-2014, 10:37 AM
RE: Ants -- First post! - by olive_morphia - 05-31-2014, 10:57 PM
RE: Ants -- First post! - by rowens - 06-01-2014, 05:50 AM
RE: Ants -- First post! - by Erthona - 06-01-2014, 06:10 AM
RE: Ants -- First post! - by Isis - 06-01-2014, 12:21 PM



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