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As if it knows
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05-31-2014, 07:18 AM
Hi, I find that the first 3 lines are not a sentence but could be combined as one. I find the point of view as opposites; you talk at first of a creator, then you say nothing is responsible? You have your own points valid to your beliefs I feel could be said more clearly. I am sure you will get better help, and wish you luck, Loretta
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As if it knows - by Hog Butcher - 05-30-2014, 03:44 PM
RE: As if it knows - by LorettaYoung - 05-31-2014, 07:18 AM
RE: As if it knows - by trueenigma - 06-01-2014, 02:10 PM
RE: As if it knows - by tectak - 06-02-2014, 02:22 AM
RE: As if it knows - by Jimmy Stark - 06-02-2014, 11:58 AM
RE: As if it knows - by Isis - 06-05-2014, 04:23 AM
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