Of a Troubled Mind
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Hi, i commend your honesty; your sharing the experience: I could suggest you seek help with punctuation, which I am doing myself; and the poem can be worked on, but I am not qualified for that; I think that darkness is a valid concern for poets. Loretta
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Of a Troubled Mind - by BipolaRed - 05-28-2014, 12:23 PM
RE: Of a Troubled Mind - by Brownlie - 05-28-2014, 01:53 PM
RE: Of a Troubled Mind - by Celestina Waters - 05-30-2014, 08:30 PM
RE: Of a Troubled Mind - by tectak - 05-31-2014, 05:22 AM
RE: Of a Troubled Mind - by LorettaYoung - 05-31-2014, 04:13 AM
RE: Of a Troubled Mind - by Erthona - 05-31-2014, 04:58 AM
RE: Of a Troubled Mind - by Erthona - 05-31-2014, 06:13 AM
RE: Of a Troubled Mind - by LorettaYoung - 05-31-2014, 06:46 AM



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