A Young Soldier Returned from Israel
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Compare and contrast. Standing high with a view of the present, smells of the forest versus the desert, it seems easy to want to look back. Your imagery and dedication to your word choice is apparent. I was there with you on the balcony, in awe. The fire Is a fine symbol of letting go of the past. Welcome.
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My favorite line: if forlorn in the folds of the Earth’s nightgown
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A Young Soldier Returned from Israel - by laffitaffi - 05-26-2014, 01:12 PM
RE: A Young Soldier Returned from Israel - by Celestina Waters - 05-30-2014, 08:24 PM



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