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05-30-2014, 11:36 AM

Hi, Loretta, thanks for reading. It's funny, I'm having the same problem with the opening lines of another poem too. I think I need a poetry therapist to figure out why I hear my openings differently than the rest of the world. Big Grin

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I'll see what I can do.

Any thoughts on we vs they?

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Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-02-2014, 02:34 AM

RE: Old Love - by Erthona - 05-02-2014, 02:45 AM

RE: Old Love - by ellajam - 05-02-2014, 02:52 AM

RE: Old Love - by 71degrees - 05-02-2014, 11:14 AM

RE: Old Love - by tomoffing - 05-02-2014, 11:58 AM

RE: Old Love - by ellajam - 05-02-2014, 01:31 PM

RE: Old Love - by Erthona - 05-02-2014, 03:03 PM

RE: Old Love - by ellajam - 05-02-2014, 06:29 PM

RE: Old Love - by Erthona - 05-03-2014, 02:07 AM

RE: Old Love - by Caleb Murdock - 05-03-2014, 08:36 AM

RE: Old Love - by milo - 05-03-2014, 09:12 AM

RE: Old Love - by ellajam - 05-03-2014, 01:37 PM

RE: Old Love - by Caleb Murdock - 05-03-2014, 01:52 PM

RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-29-2014, 09:22 PM

RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ChristopherSea - 05-30-2014, 02:29 AM

RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-30-2014, 03:11 AM

RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by Brownlie - 05-30-2014, 07:29 AM

RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-30-2014, 07:49 AM

RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by billy - 05-30-2014, 11:06 AM

RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-30-2014, 11:17 AM

RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by LorettaYoung - 05-30-2014, 11:19 AM

RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-30-2014, 11:36 AM

RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by LorettaYoung - 05-30-2014, 12:12 PM

RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by 71degrees - 05-30-2014, 10:46 PM

RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-30-2014, 11:48 PM

RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by LorettaYoung - 05-31-2014, 12:22 AM

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