05-30-2014, 07:49 AM
Brownlie, thank you so much for giving it such a thorough reading. Your comments make me think this may be worth taking another swing at it, I will consider each one and try to make some improvements.
Yes, the meter's pretty wonky, the original had none but I'm at the stage where when I edit I end up with some but not all, awful, huh?
I suppose I better go all or nothing. Again, your time and perceptions are greatly appreciated.
Yes, the meter's pretty wonky, the original had none but I'm at the stage where when I edit I end up with some but not all, awful, huh?
I suppose I better go all or nothing. Again, your time and perceptions are greatly appreciated.
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