Pipe Dream

Pipe Dream

olive_morphia
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05-29-2014, 11:45 PM

Awesome. I like the activist-feel to it.

Not sure I'm grasping the stanza, "What meekness remains is hollowed...etc.". Could you clarify?

Also, I feel like I want more. You offer some really good imagery, and I like the idea of everything turning into skyscrapers in the end. But maybe elaborate a bit, or explore some a little more, because there is a lot here but this seems to be only one small piece.

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RE: Pipe Dream - by kindofahippy - 05-09-2014, 12:14 AM

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RE: Pipe Dream - by Erthona - 05-10-2014, 08:11 AM

RE: Pipe Dream - by benno_422 - 05-10-2014, 10:30 AM

RE: Pipe Dream - by Eugene_Moon - 05-11-2014, 02:58 AM

RE: Pipe Dream - by Martyl - 05-11-2014, 03:43 AM

RE: Pipe Dream - by bbcashdollar - 05-11-2014, 09:57 PM

RE: Pipe Dream - by SuicidalBlueJay - 05-12-2014, 11:09 PM

RE: Pipe Dream - by benno_422 - 05-13-2014, 08:49 AM

RE: Pipe Dream - by Babeanew - 05-14-2014, 07:50 AM

RE: Pipe Dream - by olive_morphia - 05-29-2014, 11:45 PM

RE: Pipe Dream - by Isis - 06-02-2014, 02:25 AM

RE: Pipe Dream - by bena - 06-02-2014, 05:46 AM

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