Talking ‘bout My Gen, gen, gen, gen-gene—ah-ration

[ChristopherSea]

Dale, this is some monstrosity to workshop. Since Tom nitpicked the details, I will address some of the macros. I love all of references, but perhaps you have gone too far in your mixture. Your timeline seems off as you dash back and forth across the 60 and 70 decades, even the 80's, where the mullet ruled. The psychedelia never plays well off of disco or Springsteen. Maybe a greater trilogy (60s-70s-80s) would do better justice to your theme.

By the way, are you trying to pull off Daltry's defiant/repressed youth swaggering stutter in that title or splay out a locus of linked genes? A s-s-stutter is usually designated by a first letter repeat like in the Who song: I'm 'just talkin' 'bout my g-g-g-generation.' I'm not certain what you are trying to demonstrate in that odd stutter of a title./Chris