Sense Ending

[QDeathstar]

This is my first edit... I think it lost some of the crispness.


Inhale
air.

Wet. Cool. Still.

Scratch
skin.

Hard. Cracked. Pale.

Grasp
steel.

Rust. Cringe. Seal.

Taste
fate.

Last. Culled. Meal.

Know
death.

See. Truth. Kneel.

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I know the periods appear to be there for no reason, but commas look so terrible and i dont think speak to the finality of the matter.