Sense Ending

Sense Ending

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05-28-2014, 09:00 AM

Thank you. I will try to improve my word choice. I agree there are some contradictions.

Finally, I liked your analogy to making love.

He is kneeling after death.

Also, i people say "rhymes sound forced"

What does that mean?

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Sense Ending - by QDeathstar - 05-27-2014, 10:32 AM

RE: Ending - by Tiger the Lion - 05-27-2014, 11:11 AM

RE: Ending - by Expressthefeelin - 05-27-2014, 11:37 AM

RE: Ending - by QDeathstar - 05-28-2014, 06:41 AM

RE: Ending - by Erthona - 05-28-2014, 08:01 AM

RE: Ending - by QDeathstar - 05-28-2014, 09:00 AM

RE: Ending - by QDeathstar - 05-28-2014, 11:56 AM

RE: Ending - by Erthona - 05-29-2014, 05:03 AM

RE: Ending - by QDeathstar - 05-29-2014, 07:04 AM

RE: Ending - by olive_morphia - 05-29-2014, 11:32 PM

RE: Ending - by LorettaYoung - 05-30-2014, 11:04 AM

RE: Ending - by QDeathstar - 06-02-2014, 11:29 AM

RE: Sense Ending - by LorettaYoung - 06-04-2014, 11:23 AM

RE: Sense Ending - by Jimmy Stark - 06-04-2014, 11:44 PM

RE: Sense Ending - by just mercedes - 06-05-2014, 07:05 AM

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