Tectonics

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Oh, I really like this, the formatting is so much more than a gimmick. I like italics as a divider in addition to the layout and it certainly suits the subject. I can hear the rift like screeching on a blackboard, both sides are funny but add up to a sad whole.

Strived sounds wrong, strove or something else?

The only other thing is I would like for him to be tec and her to be tonic, but I guess that would pretty well wreck it.

Thanks for the read, sweet.

                                                        Tec         tonics


Their continents obliquely drifted apart               He stuck to

as she strived for a life of veganism,       proven indulgences,

absurd yoga positions and other     like bacon cheese burgers

fads of new age abstinence.     weightlifting and vintage porn.