Sense Ending

[Tiger the Lion]

I really like this. It's very tight structurally and took me a few reads to think of any suggestions. If the piece was meant to be as strict as I think, then the first word that jumps out at me is "cage". I think because it is the first noun to appear in any of the 3 word lines. It leads "meal" in the next thought sounding a little forced, even if the content is fantastic. I would do my best to avoid nouns beyond Air, Stone, Steel, Fate, Death, all of which are exactly where they should be. Nice job.