05-27-2014, 05:33 AM
It took a while for me to want to go through this. I didn't quite capture my attention to read about cockroaches, I had my doubts it would be as intriguing as when Burroughs had a go at them.
But when I take the time to reflect there is a certain humility and wisdom in writing about such everyday situations, and also finding deep meanings and really important decisions which eventually sums up who we choose to be.
I cannot help you here in giving any tips on where you should use different wording, my reflections usually end up on what meanings I find, not in the wrapping. Of course if it is totally stripped, I will notice and try to offer my help, but here I think the wrapping was good enough to convey the meaning, which i treasure more than the other.
But when I take the time to reflect there is a certain humility and wisdom in writing about such everyday situations, and also finding deep meanings and really important decisions which eventually sums up who we choose to be.
I cannot help you here in giving any tips on where you should use different wording, my reflections usually end up on what meanings I find, not in the wrapping. Of course if it is totally stripped, I will notice and try to offer my help, but here I think the wrapping was good enough to convey the meaning, which i treasure more than the other.