05-26-2014, 08:59 PM
I cannot tell if you are saying science is a religion (negative connotation), that the "church" is a wall, or perhaps you are switching from being a "follower of science" to a "follower of the church".
Also, when you capitalized the word the in the second line, it made me feel like the speaker was arrogant. Capitalizing THE makes it seem as if the speaker thinks he is the only one who thinks "this" way.
Also, when you capitalized the word the in the second line, it made me feel like the speaker was arrogant. Capitalizing THE makes it seem as if the speaker thinks he is the only one who thinks "this" way.