05-25-2014, 10:36 AM
it reminds me too much of the drunken sailor to stick with it
if it was perverted, or had no reference to the original i'd probably like what you did, but for me it just feels a few words have been changes. i can see some greek allusion, but not enough to clear the drunken sailor away.
if it was perverted, or had no reference to the original i'd probably like what you did, but for me it just feels a few words have been changes. i can see some greek allusion, but not enough to clear the drunken sailor away.