Cataclysmic

[ellajam]

Hi, standalone, welcome. If you decide to edit, here are a few notes I hope will help.

She was a dark angel
in a sea of sparkling light,
Her wings were black and broken, Should "her" be capitalized?
theirs were perfect white I don't know who "theirs" refers to. Period.

Smoke didnt work, didn't
and bruises fade.
She desired more pain,
a more permanent thing. "Thing" is a really non-descriptive word. It adds nothing that I can see and doesn't fit your rhyme scheme.

But one scar wouldnt do,
there had to be more,
She fought with her demons, Again, should "she" be capitalized?
but lost the war.

Thanks for the read.