Kind of a downer. Does this count as poetry? What devices do I need to put in?
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I feel weird.
Like something's dragging me down.
And I just can't come back up.

I'm feeling better now
That weight is leaving now
But through my wrists, now

I feel weird
Like something's making me float
And I just want to come back down.
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Kind of a downer. Does this count as poetry? What devices do I need to put in? - by NBowers01 - 05-22-2014, 12:39 PM



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