Satan's Book -second edit

[Mopkins]

Hi Serloco, thanks for reading and commenting. By flow, I can only assume you mean meter, and the line in question as I've scanned it is iambic - as is most of the poem, so I'm not sure why that one is a problem for you. If it's merely the wording in the line, I could put

'so I confess, repent, and then (to get him off my case)" although to me the brackets seem unnecessary...

Oh well, you got me thinking anyhow, cheers


Marianne