It is me
#3
I agree that punctuation would make your poiung more clear, but also instead of just using cant, or another verb in various parts, add a subject so we're all aware of what is doing the action
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It is me - by Jambalaya - 05-22-2014, 09:42 AM
RE: It is me - by Erthona - 05-22-2014, 11:19 AM
RE: It is me - by StandingAlone - 05-22-2014, 11:26 AM
RE: It is me - by Celestina Waters - 05-27-2014, 03:45 AM
RE: It is me - by olive_morphia - 05-29-2014, 11:07 PM



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