A Spoon
#2
unlike the flimsy tools that the hand has come to expect would come from this drawer in particular

The brain awakens to its experience

Those are the most awkward lines. But you can leave them that way if you think it adds something to the story.

The phone in the last line is the only thing that's alive. Maybe that's the point.
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A Spoon - by Hog Butcher - 05-21-2014, 08:30 PM
RE: A Spoon - by rowens - 05-21-2014, 10:32 PM
RE: A Spoon - by Hog Butcher - 05-21-2014, 10:38 PM
RE: A Spoon - by rowens - 05-21-2014, 10:41 PM
RE: A Spoon - by Brownlie - 05-22-2014, 02:46 AM
RE: A Spoon - by RSaba - 05-22-2014, 05:45 AM
RE: A Spoon - by Todd - 05-22-2014, 06:25 AM
RE: A Spoon - by Isis - 05-24-2014, 01:22 PM
RE: A Spoon - by kindofahippy - 05-24-2014, 10:17 PM
RE: A Spoon - by Hog Butcher - 05-30-2014, 03:37 PM



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