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Organ planet (explicit)
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05-21-2014, 10:21 AM
Have to agree with most of the advice on the expletives. Especially in triplets on the first line. Sounds a little like garage band lyrics. Having said that I fully agree with ChristopherSea that L3 is a great opening. If it were my piece (which it isn't) I would flirt with...
There’s an organ inside the doctors don’t know about; spilling dark bile in expletives... |
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Organ planet (explicit) - by Babeanew - 05-14-2014, 08:14 AM
RE: Organ planet (explicit) - by tectak - 05-14-2014, 03:57 PM
RE: Organ planet (explicit) - by LorettaYoung - 05-15-2014, 03:21 AM
RE: Organ planet (explicit) - by billy - 05-14-2014, 06:19 PM
RE: Organ planet (explicit) - by Babeanew - 05-14-2014, 06:45 PM
RE: Organ planet (explicit) - by billy - 05-15-2014, 10:01 AM
RE: Organ planet (explicit) - by ChristopherSea - 05-14-2014, 06:47 PM
RE: Organ planet (explicit) - by nb - 05-14-2014, 09:58 PM
RE: Organ planet (explicit) - by Erthona - 05-15-2014, 11:07 AM
RE: Organ planet (explicit) - by Tdurr - 05-20-2014, 11:54 AM
RE: Organ planet (explicit) - by Tiger the Lion - 05-21-2014, 10:21 AM
RE: Organ planet (explicit) - by Rustymetal - 01-28-2015, 04:58 PM
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