05-21-2014, 05:11 AM
(05-21-2014, 03:58 AM)tectak Wrote:Actually, I love it now. I like your Hitchcockian treatment in the aspect of the slow build of suspense as well.(05-21-2014, 01:26 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote:Yep...don'tcha just love it?(05-21-2014, 12:32 AM)Todd Wrote: I will accept your dramatic note which I missed. I realize can't might be too heavy handed and I acknowledge the subtlety of won't.It's terrifying!
It makes Since Yesterday even a better title though.
Love, Emma still has some irony too it though
Or if we count crazy...it's actually a bit scary.
Best,
tectak
(05-21-2014, 12:15 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote:As billy would say...he he.(05-20-2014, 11:27 PM)tectak Wrote: Thanks for thisTodd. Some bits I will incorporate immediately but I just want you to consider this before I make big changes...there is a reason why the kids won't wake up...since yesterday.You son of sea cook! I thought this was a very bizarre note with some real peculiar references to the children, i.e. not being able to love them in between, washing away cares, the wailing and not being able to wake the kids. You have made this she-devil drown the poor innocents, didn't you?
Best,
Tom
Dah dudud daaaaah!(dramatic chord sequence)
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris



