Love, Emma edit 0.00001 hog et al
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(05-21-2014, 03:58 AM)tectak Wrote:  
(05-21-2014, 01:26 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote:  
(05-21-2014, 12:32 AM)Todd Wrote:  I will accept your dramatic note which I missed. I realize can't might be too heavy handed and I acknowledge the subtlety of won't.

It makes Since Yesterday even a better title though.

Love, Emma still has some irony too it though

Or if we count crazy...it's actually a bit scary.
It's terrifying!
Yep...don'tcha just love it?Smile
Best,
tectak

(05-21-2014, 12:15 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote:  
(05-20-2014, 11:27 PM)tectak Wrote:  Thanks for thisTodd. Some bits I will incorporate immediately but I just want you to consider this before I make big changes...there is a reason why the kids won't wake up...since yesterday.
Best,
Tom
Dah dudud daaaaah!(dramatic chord sequence)
You son of sea cook! I thought this was a very bizarre note with some real peculiar references to the children, i.e. not being able to love them in between, washing away cares, the wailing and not being able to wake the kids. You have made this she-devil drown the poor innocents, didn't you? Sad
As billy would say...he he.
Actually, I love it now. I like your Hitchcockian treatment in the aspect of the slow build of suspense as well. Thumbsup
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Messages In This Thread
Love, Emma edit 0.00001 hog et al - by tectak - 05-20-2014, 07:49 PM
RE: Love, Emma - by Todd - 05-20-2014, 11:06 PM
RE: Love, Emma - by tectak - 05-20-2014, 11:27 PM
RE: Love, Emma - by ChristopherSea - 05-21-2014, 12:15 AM
RE: Love, Emma - by Todd - 05-21-2014, 12:32 AM
RE: Love, Emma - by ChristopherSea - 05-21-2014, 01:26 AM
RE: Love, Emma - by tectak - 05-21-2014, 03:58 AM
RE: Love, Emma - by ChristopherSea - 05-21-2014, 05:11 AM
RE: Love, Emma edit 0.00001 et al - by tectak - 05-21-2014, 09:38 PM



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