05-21-2014, 03:58 AM
(05-21-2014, 01:26 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote:Yep...don'tcha just love it?(05-21-2014, 12:32 AM)Todd Wrote: I will accept your dramatic note which I missed. I realize can't might be too heavy handed and I acknowledge the subtlety of won't.It's terrifying!
It makes Since Yesterday even a better title though.
Love, Emma still has some irony too it though
Or if we count crazy...it's actually a bit scary.

Best,
tectak
(05-21-2014, 12:15 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote:As billy would say...he he.(05-20-2014, 11:27 PM)tectak Wrote:You son of sea cook! I thought this was a very bizarre note with some real peculiar references to the children, i.e. not being able to love them in between, washing away cares, the wailing and not being able to wake the kids. You have made this she-devil drown the poor innocents, didn't you?(05-20-2014, 11:06 PM)Todd Wrote: Well Tom, I'll take a stab at this.Thanks for thisTodd. Some bits I will incorporate immediately but I just want you to consider this before I make big changes...there is a reason why the kids won't wake up...since yesterday.
When I think about your title it makes me think that there's still a sad level of residual love in the relationship. If you don't want to convey that maybe "Since Yesterday" would be a possible change.
Enjoyed the read Tom. I hope the comments help some.
Best,
Todd
Best,
Tom
Dah dudud daaaaah!(dramatic chord sequence)


