Organ planet (explicit)

[Tdurr]

Organ planet

Fuck…Fuck…Fuck… He said grinning.

That’s the dark bile spilling out.

There’s an organ inside, doctors don’t know about.

Spilling acid like burning hot magma in the middle of the self.

Self center that is.

Try to feel your center, well that’s where that is…

Hot burning coal, air suction chokes.

Wolf chewing on a rock.

Cock desperate for cunt.

Piercing erupt volcano.

Sprout on old potato.

That’s where’s from the disease

that eats you from in to out.

One tiny little bite after another.

One beany umbilical cord, held too tight.

A.B

First poem, looking forward to read your critiques!

I love the concept.
The organ is self centeredness? Correct?
There are only a few errors, that are grammatical.
They may be purposeful, but! I thought I would point them out.

"That's where's"
Confused me a bit as well