05-20-2014, 09:49 AM
Great images. There were only two lines that were distracting for me.
Not purposefully, but not by accident.
In mid-poem I began wondering if this is possible and it became a bit of a riddle. Maybe there is a way to say that it was intentionally on accident.
In the most beautiful.
I was left wondering if it should have way at the end.
Not purposefully, but not by accident.
In mid-poem I began wondering if this is possible and it became a bit of a riddle. Maybe there is a way to say that it was intentionally on accident.
In the most beautiful.
I was left wondering if it should have way at the end.