05-20-2014, 08:48 AM
I like the simplicity to this.
And i mean this in the most positive of ways.
I would rework;
His hand touched my spine.
Not purposefully, but not by accident.
More so the second part. Maybe give more vivid detail into how you 'felt' your spine was touched
And i mean this in the most positive of ways.
I would rework;
His hand touched my spine.
Not purposefully, but not by accident.
More so the second part. Maybe give more vivid detail into how you 'felt' your spine was touched