05-19-2014, 03:28 PM
(05-19-2014, 10:04 AM)Erthona Wrote: "Of all those tasty cows I’ve killedThanks for taking a look you make a good point about the title and the last stanza.
so what is death to me?
"To slay those robbing all my cups"
playing is such a hoot?
Yeah that last stanza is not so great. I'd change the title and leave a little suspense. But it is fun.
Dale

