Ronald McDonald's Soliloquy
#3
"Of all those tasty cows I’ve killed
so what is death to me?

"To slay those robbing all my cups"
playing is such a hoot?

Yeah that last stanza is not so great. I'd change the title and leave a little suspense. But it is fun.


Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Ronald McDonald's Soliloquy - by Brownlie - 05-18-2014, 12:36 AM
RE: Ronald McDonald's Soliloquy - by rowens - 05-18-2014, 08:38 AM
RE: Ronald McDonald's Soliloquy - by Erthona - 05-19-2014, 10:04 AM
RE: Ronald McDonald's Soliloquy - by Brownlie - 05-19-2014, 03:28 PM



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