05-19-2014, 07:23 AM
Good evening.
3 lines that stick out and carry some kind of emotional punch here. (for me)
"and Lennon's the ghost of a stain by now."
- I like it, but im not quite sure why.. if it's your confession that you desperately need new t-shirts or that it paints a (probably) very accurate picture in my head of how faded it is. Or maybe it's just my fascination with the word ghost.
"in the hot light of summer McDonald's is France, almost."
- I can't wrap my head around it, but my heart loves it.
Beside my bed is a Kindle
with an H. Rider Haggard in it, 20% read.
I don't know if I can be bothered to read.
- Ok, so it's not a line. But I was planning on just using your last line her, until I read it again and felt the whole thing deserved some form of praise. I like the attitude and the honesty behind it. It's kinda cool.
3 lines that stick out and carry some kind of emotional punch here. (for me)
"and Lennon's the ghost of a stain by now."
- I like it, but im not quite sure why.. if it's your confession that you desperately need new t-shirts or that it paints a (probably) very accurate picture in my head of how faded it is. Or maybe it's just my fascination with the word ghost.
"in the hot light of summer McDonald's is France, almost."
- I can't wrap my head around it, but my heart loves it.
Beside my bed is a Kindle
with an H. Rider Haggard in it, 20% read.
I don't know if I can be bothered to read.
- Ok, so it's not a line. But I was planning on just using your last line her, until I read it again and felt the whole thing deserved some form of praise. I like the attitude and the honesty behind it. It's kinda cool.