05-18-2014, 09:09 PM
(04-24-2014, 10:58 AM)expiring_touch Wrote: On this night I sitIt was challenging to decipher some of this poem, but I get the feeling that it's about the reflection of one person on times past.
in the back alley of dreams, of two-some minds Does this mean that someone is undecided? Being of 'two minds'? Or is it referencing two different people.
in mid-spring bloom - right now I don't see why this phrase is necessary.
when we none of us can fail or care
to know the future. a nice attempt to capture the nostalgia of careless times.
I knew your face before, it sang
beneath the shades of unsung trees
etched on my life line –
eyes for embers and mouth for mirror
covered with black velvet. - a metaphor for night?
I started like a bird this night, a cooling drift
across my midriff; and all that was,
was fair, we've come
full circle.
