05-18-2014, 05:55 AM
(05-18-2014, 05:00 AM)Thoughtjotter Wrote:Well, I think there is a distinct feeling to the form. It seems to give itself to a list of images fairly well. In this case, I suppose I was imitating a rendition of Song of Hiawatha which I posted in the music section. Hence, the flaming water. Thanks for reading.(05-13-2014, 04:21 PM)Brownlie Wrote: Let me sing you of my troublesHow many ways can Trochaic Tetrameter be read? It can surly be confusing
All my woes and all my sorrows
Ever clear and two buck bottles
Red and swollen blistered fingers
Peeling skin on bones that fractured
Reaching like the wrinkled water
Praying to the greying moonlight
Singing songs of flaming water

