05-18-2014, 05:26 AM
Definitely add the correct punctuation. I wasn't sure what to think without it. I loved the last 6 line or so. Don't like the "born, lived, died" line too cliche. Spice it up.
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RE: Come with me - by mrwhite - 05-18-2014, 05:26 AM
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