Alchemy (edit)
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I like this piece. The opening with the bulleted lines took me off-guard. But you won me over. It reads like an allegory, alchemy from elements to nations. The only phrase which I found too cliche was "crony capitalism".
Thanks for a good read.
poe
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Alchemy (edit) - by bbcashdollar - 05-16-2014, 11:53 AM
RE: Alchemy - by poe - 05-17-2014, 11:58 AM
RE: Alchemy - by bbcashdollar - 05-19-2014, 12:47 PM
RE: Alchemy - by Hog Butcher - 05-21-2014, 06:47 PM



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