05-17-2014, 10:12 AM
I'll take a BTL, extra malaise! Oh, this is in mild critic. I think there are probably better was to say some of this. The first couple lines seem extraordinarily forced. A corpse in the African sun does not sweat. Too much sweating the word.
"The nights are repellant and aggressive." why?
I like "the hot light of summer MacDonald's is France, almost." Although i have no idea what it means and "McDonald's" is spelled wrong. Maybe it's Scotland instead of France?
dale the empathetic
"The nights are repellant and aggressive." why?
I like "the hot light of summer MacDonald's is France, almost." Although i have no idea what it means and "McDonald's" is spelled wrong. Maybe it's Scotland instead of France?
dale the empathetic
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.